Thursday 8 September 2016

The Gingerbread Man - Writing

Mrs Toohey's writing group have been working on adding 'WOW' words to their writing to make them more interesting to read.  This week we have been writing about the 'mean' and 'sneaky' fox.  Here are some of our stories.



The fox is sly and clever and fast.  James

The naughty fox is not nice to the Gingerbread man.  Ben S

The fox is sly and mean.  He eats up the fox.  Charlie D

The fox is mean and the fox is sneaky.  Matilda

The little fox wasn't nice.  Amber

The fox was very little.  Luca

The mean fox ate the Gingerbread man up.  Dylan

The fox is sly and little.  Cooper M

The fox is naughty.  Gracie

The sneaky fox at the Gingerbread man.  Charlie P

The fox is mean and scary.  Locklyn


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